Miss May I poster... thing

This is a rough draft for a thing i want to work on for my fav band Miss May I. I contacted the MMI street team on Myspace asking if i could do any art involving the band, and i got a notification saying they read the message, and sent me a friend request, so cross your fingers... don't uncross them either.... except to eat and stuff... u know.... please please please comment on this i wanna know what to do better or to keep the same